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The possibility of life on other planets
A lot of people say that since the universe is such a huge, and that it impossible for us to be the only intelligent life forms.
Personally, I agree, because many scientists belive the life may have spris out of the ground and come in the form of microscopic and primitive aboard meteorits. There have also been discoveries of organisms they can put up with the condition of life there in space. Since are proves that life on other planets exist.
In an infinite universe, most scientists agree, that odds of life existing on a planet beside Earth are pretty high. It is unlikely however, the familiar life forms will be found on any planet within our system.
Large studios discovered that water has existed on mars for 200 millions years longer than previously thought, what´s more there was life on Earth the same time as some the last lakes on mars.
Jupiter´s tiny moon Europa is scarred with brown veins that are suspected to show where warmer,dirtier,liquid water in the moon's mantle seeped through it´s crust.
Another planet mentioned in connection with life in the solar system is Titan, the largest of the moons of saturn, Titan has atmosphere of methane.
A rich assortment of organic molecules is found titan´s atmosphere, as products of the ammonia/ methane chemistry. This mixture includes hydrogen cyanide a compound in the path to the synthesis of amino acids. This finding has led to speculation that primitive life forms might be present. The low temperatures on this satellite make it.
I think somewhere in the universe there may be a planet similar to Earth, but the planets we have found are incapable of supporting any kind of life forms and this is because they are either huge balls of gas, like Jupiter and Saturn or they are too hot or too cold for life to exist on them.
Earth is still the only planet where we know life exists. The appearance of life may be extremely unlikely, and so might the evolution of technology. After all, there are many intelligent species on our planet, including dolphins, octopus, apes, parrots, and elephants, but only once in 4.6 billion years has a technologically advanced species evolved.
¡Hello María!
ResponderEliminarI´m writing to give my humble opinion about your article, I promise to tell the truth and nothing but the truth. Well, in first hand congratulations! I´m glad that the as time passes you overcome the fear to the language, however I´ve got to admit, you still have some problems in your execution.
I noticed that even though you researched some information, you tried to translate with your own words instead of just copying what you read, just a little part seems scientifically enough to don´t look like your opinion but it’s ok I do not consider it cheating. In the other hand, if we talk about expressing your ideas clearly, well, that was made more poorly, because it confused me sometimes due to the extra or lack of words that was present and tangled ideas, which a little of fluency. In addition, I suggest you to be more firm in your thoughts, it was more than once when you contradict what you were saying, that’s why in the first part I rate you with 1 out of 2.
In the vocabulary section you were better, in my viewpoint no word was really repetitive or extremely used and some nexus which are not commonly use by you, were added such a good job! I give the whole point in here.
I didn’t spot errors in your grammar or the verbs tenses (just in one case I have no idea what verb you were looking for), nor related to the use of plural and singular, so here we have another great job I grant the full point.
And at least, let’s talk about the mechanics, in punctuation you have nothing to be afraid of, everything was good; in capitalization I want to chop your head of (I´m joking, almost) All the planets names must go with capital letters! You just missed one but it’s still important, now, let’s put that aside and start with your most challenging area as I could observe: the spelling, in here you had multiple mistakes and I wouldn’t mention this if I thought these were provoke by typing, I know English doesn’t make it easy for you but you have to put more effort in this, and what worries me the most is that some words are not rare and you keep misspelling them, please don’t take this as a critic instead use it as an advice to improve. I give you .5 points out of 1.
Your final score is 3.5, not that bad I know you can improve, thanks for reading I believe in you Maria. Bye.
-Laura Harrison.